Essay Reflection

At the beginning of the year my essay had to many needless parts to it and lacked proper word choice. On my second essay I was able to eliminate much of the clutter in the essay and improved my word choicde, but still had trouble with generalization. On this essay I believe that I was able to fully cover all parts of the prompt and explain all of the ideas I was working towards. Hopefully my essay skills will continue to progress as we move on.