Sunday, November 14, 2010

Essay Improvement

Towards the beginning of the semester I did alright but soon I started generalizing which is where the majority of points got taken off. On my most recent essay I believe I improved on this and started using an even stronger set of vocab to set off the tone for my work.

2 comments:

  1. very good Clayton, you have improved in those areas

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  2. I had the same problem with generalization, though now it is improving as I'm sure yours is as well.

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