In this essay i focused more on improving the 2nd part of the topic. In my first two essays, my focus on the topic has only been in the first part of the topic. I tried to change this, by making more of my essay about the second part of my topic. Hopefully by doing this I improve my writing and my essay grade.
Good for you.
ReplyDeleteThat's what I did too. Hopefully everyone's essay scores go up.
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