Monday, November 8, 2010

Essay Improvements

I think I have improved the most on answering the entire prompt. Comparing my first and second essay, I didn't answer the whole prompt correctly on the first one, whereas on the second one, I was sure to answer all parts. Another thing I have improved on is connecting the body paragraphs to the thesis. Learning to effectively make a connection between everything in the essay has be greatly beneficial to me. Looking at all this skills I have improved on, I hope to improve more and more as the year continues.
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5 comments:

  1. Katie R.November 9, 2010 at 1:08 PM

    Hey Josie! That is great that you are making improvements.I have had trouble on answering all parts of the prompt too but hopefully on this last essay, I improved!

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  2. Kayla HNovember 9, 2010 at 1:19 PM

    I had trouble on answering all parts of the prompt too! I think everyone struggled with that!

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  3. TiffanyNovember 9, 2010 at 5:35 PM

    Good job Josie! I'm sure you did great on this essay by focusing on those things.

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  4. BridgetNovember 15, 2010 at 2:57 PM

    i had trouble on that too!

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  5. MaggieDayNovember 15, 2010 at 6:55 PM

    I struggled with that too. I'm glad you're improving!

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