Tuesday, November 9, 2010

Essay reflection

In this previous essay I really improved on orginization and answering the prompt. I revised my essay multiple times and rewrote it to make sense and really answer the prompt in the best way possible. I did not do these two things very well on my past essays, along with not including a works cited which i have included for this essay.

2 comments:

  1. Tori Puellman
    I agree, in my summer essay I had trouble answering all parts of the prompt. So on the Book of Fred essay I worked on answering all parts of the prompt and checking t make sure that all my statements made sense.

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  2. I also agree, answering all of the prompt seems to have definatly helped out! It was tough at first to take all the parts out of the prompt and then to answer all of it, but it looks and sounds better once it is done.

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