One thing I think I improved on since my last essay is supporting my ideas. Since I started writing my essays last year I have not done a very good job finding quotes and situations to back up my ideas. I was making too many assumptions and not giving as many examples. I think that in my past essay I backed my ideas and thoughts up to line up well with the situations in the book to show what led me to think the things I did.
Good for you Hayley! I'm still working on explaining my quotes thoroughly and completing my thoughts.
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