Monday, September 6, 2010

My Improvement Goal

My goal is to improve on the content and fluency in my essay.

4 comments:

  1. Tori Puellman
    Those are some of my problems too, maybe we can edit each others next paper to check for the content and fluency.

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  2. I have the same problem with content. Ihope we can both get better on that.

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  3. thats what my goal for the next essay is too!

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